Sunday, April 10, 2011

IELTS Writing Task 2

Topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earnings money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

As technological advancement becomes global, the perception of career development also changes. Some people say that long life comes with job stability while others argue that having several careers and further education may allow flexibility in the changing workplace. Clearly, due to higher self-fulfillment and social needs, the new fashion may involve several career prospects.

It may have positive perspectives to possess a single career for some professions. An example of this is a medical career. It is tough to abandon this profession which involves more than seven years of study in order to embark another one instead. Another benefit of a single profession is that the repeated work performance can result in effective and efficient outcomes. Also, work can be effectively performed due to expertise and practical experience. Therefore, fruitful and potent results of work may be gained through life career.

However, some types of jobs gradually disappear over decades due to the enormous changes of technology. For example, robots have replaced factory assembly labour in the automobile industry. Also, ATMs are now available which result in losing some involved positions. This indicates that even the expertise of a particular skill is no longer safe; consequently new skills and further education are potentially to keep pace with the advancement of technological breakthroughs. Similarly, travel agencies and retail stores have gone online and those who used to perform these jobs have been faced with a mid-life career changes. Competition has increased, and small businesses have been occupied by large corporations that are often multinationals. Thus, it is essential to upgrade new skills to advance lifestyle as technology changes.

In conclusion, there are many advantages for life through career upgrading which broader practical skills and horizon of perspectives can be learnt.

By Sophal Nguon

2 comments:

  1. Hi,

    You do have a great writing piece. Well expressed thought. Your informations were organized clearly. Just make sure that your tenses are correct. Keep it up.

    Thank you.

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